Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I had to buy when I were six years old.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think it's the band in, umm, so as uh, because umm, young people is a very, uh, easy and they often, uh, choose public chess board and uh, uh.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần đúng ngữ pháp, rõ ràng và đầy đủ. Học sinh nên dùng thì quá khứ đơn đúng (I had / I bought), chủ-động phù hợp (I bought a bike when I was six). Nên thêm một câu ngắn giải thích hoặc kỉ niệm để làm phong phú nội dung, tránh lỗi số ít/ số nhiều và động từ sai. Ví dụ cụ thể, thời điểm và cảm xúc sẽ làm câu tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: I bought a bike when I was six years old. I remember learning to ride it in my neighborhood park, and my father helped me until I felt confident.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời hiện tại rất lủng củng, nhiều ừm/ừh và ngữ pháp sai. Học sinh cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/Somewhat) với lý do rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để liên kết ý (because, so, therefore). Chú ý đồng nhất chủ ngữ-động từ (young people are), dùng từ vựng phù hợp (public transport, cycling, preferences). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể để minh hoạ sẽ cải thiện tính hiệu quả và tự nhiên.
Ví dụ: I think bikes are fairly popular, especially in cities. Many young people prefer cycling because it is cheap and convenient, and some also use public transport for longer trips.
× I had to buy when I were six years old.
✓ I bought one when I was six years old.
The original sentence uses incorrect verb form and auxiliary. 'Had to buy' implies obligation and lacks an object; context asks possession, so simple past 'bought' is appropriate. 'Were' is incorrect for singular first person; use past 'was'. Suggestion: use simple past for past events and match subject with correct past tense verb (I was).
× I think it's the band in, umm, so as uh, because umm, young people is a very, uh, easy and they often, uh, choose public chess board and uh, uh.
✓ I think bikes are popular because they are very convenient for young people, and they often choose public transport or shared bicycles.
The sentence has multiple issues: incorrect pronoun 'it' referring to plural 'bikes', singular verb 'is' with plural subject 'young people', and unclear noun phrases like 'the band in' and 'public chess board'. Replace 'it' with 'bikes' and use plural verbs 'are'. Use 'they' to refer back to 'young people' and choose clear nouns 'public transport' or 'shared bicycles'. Improve fluency by removing fillers and using simple present 'think' for general statements.