Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh) and repetition. Also correct small grammar errors (e.g., “big massive” → choose one adjective; “bought my for my 7th birthday” → “bought it for my 7th birthday”).

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike as a child. It was my father’s bike fitted with training wheels, which my parents bought for my 7th birthday. I often rode it to the nearby park with my friends, where we would practice riding together.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then explain with specific examples and use linking words. Avoid hesitation sounds and improve grammar and word order (e.g., “we use them on a daily basis” and “to carry vegetables or fruits”). Try to use a wider but appropriate vocabulary (e.g., convenient, economical).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them on a daily basis to commute to work or to carry groceries like vegetables and fruit because they are convenient and economical. In addition, bikes are often the quickest way to move around crowded neighborhoods.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Uh, it was a big massive uh, It was my father's bike with training wheels that my parents bought my for my 7th birthday and I rode it to the road near my house or near my park near a park.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was very big and it was my father's bike with training wheels that my parents bought for my 7th birthday, and I rode it on the road near my house or near a park.

Multiple tense and word-order problems: 'bought my for my 7th birthday' has incorrect word order and extra pronoun 'my'; correct is 'bought for my 7th birthday'. 'I rode it to the road' is unnatural for describing travel along/onto a road; use 'rode it on the road'. 'big massive' is redundant and awkward; use 'very big' or just 'massive'. Also remove filler sounds 'Uh' and capitalize consistently. Suggestion: keep simple past tense (had, was, bought, rode) because the question asks about a past period.

× Yes, of course bikes are more popular in our country. Uh, we use for daily basis to go out and bring any uh, vegetables, fruits or we go for shopping bike, uh, bikes are very useful.

✓ Yes, of course bikes are very popular in our country. We use them on a daily basis to go out, to bring vegetables and fruits, or to go shopping. Bikes are very useful.

Problems with present tense expression and sentence structure: 'bikes are more popular' is comparative without reference—use 'very popular'. 'We use for daily basis' is incorrect preposition and article use; correct phrase is 'use them on a daily basis'. 'bring any vegetables, fruits' is awkward; use 'to bring vegetables and fruits'. 'we go for shopping bike' is ungrammatical; separate ideas as 'to go shopping'. Also pronoun 'them' needed to refer to bikes. Suggestions: use clear present simple forms (are, use) and correct prepositions ('on a daily basis'), include pronouns when needed, and list items with parallel infinitives.