Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often ride bike to school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I can see many people commuting to work by bike every day.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, tense consistency, and add a brief supporting detail. Use a clear topic sentence in past tense, then one or two specific details connected with a linking word. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school every day, and it usually took me about ten minutes. Because the route was flat, cycling was quick and I enjoyed the fresh air.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Make the answer more developed by adding a reason or comparison and a linking word to connect ideas. Use present simple for general statements and be specific about where or why to make it more informative and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, in big cities many people commute by bike because it is cheaper and often faster than driving, especially during rush hour.

Ngữ pháp

Verb tense issue

× Yes, I often ride bike to school.

✓ Yes, I often rode a bike to school.

The question asks about a past habit ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student should use the past tense. 'Ride' is present tense; change to 'rode'. Also 'bike' needs an article 'a' when referred to as a single countable noun. Suggestion: Use past tense for past-time contexts and include the indefinite article with singular countable nouns (e.g., 'rode a bike').

Incorrect use of prepositions and verb tense

× Yes, I can see many people commuting to work by bike every day.

✓ Yes, I see many people commuting to work by bike every day.

The question asks about general popularity in the present. Using 'can see' is unnecessary and slightly changes meaning; 'see' is a simple present tense appropriate for habitual observations. Keep simple present for general facts. 'By bike' is correct; no other change needed. Suggestion: Use simple present for general statements (e.g., 'I see many people...').

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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