Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I don't have a bed just on foot because our family have no money.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, I think so because the Ali uh, pay is popular from every people and uh, we have a lot of company to afford back service like Mei Tuan Alipay DD.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够自然且有语法错误,信息也不完整。请直接回答问题并用一到两句解释原因或补充细节,注意时态和词汇使用。例如用过去时说明过去没有自行车,并说明原因或替代交通方式。避免不相关或模糊的词(如 bed, just on foot)。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or took public transport.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且与问题不直接相关。应明确表达观点并给出具体理由或例子,使用连词保持逻辑顺序(for example, because, so)。注意词汇准确性(e.g. "Alipay", "bike-sharing services"),并限定在最多五句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use bike-sharing services. Companies like Ofo and Mobike, and payment apps such as Alipay make it easy and cheap to rent bikes for short trips.
× No, I don't have a bed just on foot because our family have no money.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike; I used to go on foot because our family had no money.
问题类型:Subject-verb agreement errors(主谓一致/时态搭配错误)。解析:学生回答在谈论过去是否有自行车,应该使用过去时。句中“I don't have a bed just on foot”有多处错误:'don't have'(现在时)与情景不符,应为过去时'didn't have';'bed'显然是笔误,应为'bike';'just on foot' 表达不自然,改为 'used to go on foot' 更符合英语习惯;最后 'our family have no money' 应使用过去时且主谓一致为 'our family had no money'(美式/英式都使用单数或复数形式时需注意时态,这里以过去时为主)。建议:说过去的事情时用过去时(didn't/had),用常见搭配 'have a bike',表示经常以步行方式可用 'used to go on foot' 或 'we walked'。
× Uh, yes, I think so because the Ali uh, pay is popular from every people and uh, we have a lot of company to afford back service like Mei Tuan Alipay DD.
✓ Yes, I think so because Alipay is popular with everyone, and we have many companies providing delivery services like Meituan, Alipay, and Didi.
问题类型:Incorrect use of pronouns(代词/词语使用不当)并伴有措辞和搭配错误。解析:原句中 'the Ali uh, pay' 应为专有名词 'Alipay',不需要定冠词 'the';'is popular from every people' 用法错误,正确搭配是 'popular with everyone' 或 'popular among people';'we have a lot of company to afford back service' 表达不清且单复数与词形不当,应改为 'we have many companies providing delivery services';最后 'Mei Tuan Alipay DD' 应分别写为 Meituan, Alipay, and Didi(或用英文拼写一致)。建议:专有名词不加不必要的冠词,使用固定搭配 'popular with/among',用 'companies providing services' 表达“提供服务的公司”,列举多个服务商时用并列。