Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and confident: give a clearer topic sentence, avoid fillers and uncertainty, and add one specific detail to enrich the answer. Use a linking word if you add a second idea. For example, state the age clearly, mention a brief detail (where you used it or what type it was), and avoid 'I think' or pauses like 'umm'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bicycle when I was ten, and I used it every day to ride to a nearby park. It was a small red mountain bike, and I remember practicing riding on weekends to build my confidence.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear main idea, use linking words to compare, remove fillers, and add a specific example or reason. Start with a direct opinion, then contrast with other countries using a linking word (e.g., 'however' or 'although'), and finish with a concrete example of how people use bikes locally.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country. However, they are not as common as in some European or Asian cities. For example, many students ride bicycles to school and families often cycle to nearby parks for leisure, especially on weekends.

× Yes I did. I actually had a bike when I was around 10 years old I think.

✓ Yes, I did. I actually had a bike when I was around 10 years old, I think.

Punctuation and sentence boundary: the original runs two clauses without proper punctuation. Insert commas to separate elements and improve clarity. This keeps the past-tense form correct ('did', 'had') and matches the question about childhood. Suggestion: Add a comma after 'Yes' and another before 'I think' to separate the parenthetical comment.

× I definitely think that bikes are pretty popular in our country but not as much as in other countries, but definitely used in daily, umm daily activities like going to school or umm leisure.

✓ I definitely think bikes are quite popular in our country, though not as much as in some other countries; they are definitely used in daily activities like going to school or for leisure.

There are multiple issues: repetition ('definitely' and 'daily' repeated), conjunction misuse and run-on structure. The sentence needs clearer subject and verb for the second clause: 'they are used' rather than a fragment 'but definitely used'. Also 'in other countries' is vague; 'some other countries' is clearer. Replace filler 'umm' and use 'for leisure' for correct preposition. Suggestions: Remove repeated words, provide an explicit subject and verb for the second clause, replace comma splice with semicolon or separate sentences, and use 'for leisure' instead of lone 'leisure'.