Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I got one when I was 10 years old. My uncle gave me one as a present. I often write it around my home.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I usually ride the bike to my company and in China there are many many public bike in the street and people's.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并注意动词与拼写错误,先用一句主题句直接回应,然后用1–2句具体细节扩展。避免不必要重复,句子不超过5句。可以提到你骑车的频率、目的或记忆来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I received a bicycle from my uncle when I was ten, and I rode it almost every day around our neighborhood. Riding helped me make friends and explore nearby parks, which are some of my fondest childhood memories.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 句子要更清晰并使用连接词使表述连贯,避免语法和词序错误(例如“ride the bike to my company”应为“ride my bike to work”),并把“many many public bike”改为正确的表达。可以给出具体例子或比较来支撑观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think so. Many people in China use bicycles or public bike-sharing services, and I often ride my bike to work because it is convenient and economical. For example, there are bike stations near subway exits, which makes commuting faster during rush hour.
× I often write it around my home.
✓ I often ride it around my home.
原句使用了动词“write”,语义与骑自行车不符,应使用“ride”表示骑行。动词选择错误属于时态外的词汇错误,但根据提供的列表,应归为“Present tense issue”(现在时使用不当):此句描述经常性的现在习惯动作,应使用一般现在时正确动词。建议:记住常用搭配,骑车用 ride,表示习惯动作用一般现在时(I often ride)。
× in China there are many many public bike in the street and people's.
✓ In China there are many public bikes on the streets and for people.
原句存在名词单复数错误以及介词和结构不完整问题:'many many public bike' 中 'bike' 应用复数 'bikes';'in the street' 若泛指街道应改为复数 'on the streets'(并且地点介词应为 on);句尾 'and people's' 不完整,可能想表达“为人们所用/给人们使用”,改为 'and for people' 或更自然地 'available to people'。根据要求只改属于列表中的类型,复数错误对应“Singular and plural issue”。建议:注意可数名词单复数,与many连用需复数;常用搭配为 'on the street(s)' 表示在街道上;表达“供人们使用”可用 'for people' 或 'available to people'。
× I usually ride the bike to my company and in China there are many many public bike in the street and people's.
✓ I usually ride my bike to my company, and in China there are many public bikes on the streets that people can use.
句子中 'ride the bike to my company' 更自然为 'ride my bike'(定冠词与所有格问题也涉及,但按列表归类为第三人称单数问题不完全贴合;这里仍按要求列出常见语法问题)。同时对句子进行连贯修正并改正复数与介词使用。建议:当谈到自己拥有的物品时用 'my';保持主句和从句时态一致,并用复数'bikes'和介词'on'。