Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Well, I did have a bike when I was a child, but you know, I'm not good at riding bikes. So actually I didn't use that bike a lot. But if I have a chance to use it again, I will try to learn how to how to ride a bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
To be honest, bike are not that popular in my country because it is less convenient than other transportation such as bus, subways, taxis and stuff. Well, I do think some people are still riding bikes because they think it is environmentally friendly choice.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然但有重复与啰嗦的现象(例如“how to how to”),句子可以更简洁、逻辑更清楚。建议:1) 开头直接给出主题句(有或没有自行车);2) 避免重复表达,修正语法错误;3) 用一两句具体细节丰富答案并用连词衔接,例如说明为什么没常用或想再学的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I rarely used it because I wasn't confident riding on busy streets. If I had the chance now, I would take a few lessons to rebuild my skills so I could ride safely.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 76.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确且有原因,但有语法和用词问题(如单复数、冗词“and stuff”),细节可以更具体。建议:1) 使用正确的语法和更正式的连接词;2) 用一两个具体例子或比较(比如城市/郊区差异或基础设施情况)来支持观点;3) 保持句子简洁,最多五句。
Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because public transport is faster and more convenient in most cities. However, some people, especially in university areas, prefer cycling as a cheap and environmentally friendly option because there are bike lanes and parking facilities there.
× So actually I didn't use that bike a lot. But if I have a chance to use it again, I will try to learn how to how to ride a bike.
✓ So actually I didn't use that bike a lot. But if I have a chance to use it again, I will try to learn how to ride a bike.
句中多出一个“how to”,造成重复:"learn how to how to ride" 应为 "learn how to ride"。建议检查句子中是否有重复短语,口语中说话时易产生重复,写作时应删去多余部分。
× To be honest, bike are not that popular in my country because it is less convenient than other transportation such as bus, subways, taxis and stuff.
✓ To be honest, bikes are not that popular in my country because they are less convenient than other forms of transportation such as buses, subways, taxis and so on.
原句中有多个名词时使用单数'bike'与动词'are'不一致,且代词'they'应与复数'bikes'一致;另外 'transportation' 用作不可数时前面可用 'other forms of transportation' 或将列举的交通工具改为复数。建议把单数名词改为复数(bikes, buses)并使代词和动词与主语一致。