Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you are a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course there are many bikes in my country and even there have many shield bite in some cities. And I also use the shell bike to study.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats the examiner's question and uses wrong tense/pronouns. Give a direct response with a clear topic sentence, then 1–2 supporting details. Use past tense ('was'/'were'/'did') for childhood. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I rode it to visit friends and explore the neighborhood. Because I practiced every day, I became quite confident riding on busy streets.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammar errors and unclear vocabulary (e.g. 'shield bite', 'shell bike'). Start with a clear opinion, then give 1–2 specific reasons or examples using correct vocabulary. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore) to make it coherent. Keep it brief and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many cities have bike-sharing programs, so people use bicycles to commute to work or school. I also sometimes use a shared bike to get to my university because it saves time and money.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Did you have a bike when you are a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The question uses the past tense 'Did you have', so the time expression must also be in the past. 'are a child' is present tense and incorrect for past context. Change 'are' to the past form 'were'. Suggestion: match the verb tense to the time frame; use 'were' for past situations.

Present tense issue

× Yes, of course there are many bikes in my country and even there have many shield bite in some cities.

✓ Yes, of course there are many bikes in my country and some cities even have many shared bikes.

The clause 'there have many shield bite' is ungrammatical. For existence use 'there is/are' or use 'some cities have'. Also 'shield bite' seems to be a mistaken phrase; context suggests 'shared bikes'. Use 'some cities even have many shared bikes' to convey meaning. Ensure subject-verb structure: 'some cities have' (plural subject with base verb).

Incorrect use of prepositions

× And I also use the shell bike to study.

✓ And I also use the shared bike to go to school.

'Use the shell bike to study' is awkward and contains likely word choice errors. 'Shell' should be 'shared', and 'to study' is not the usual collocation for using a bike; use 'to go to school' or 'to go to my classes'. Also 'use a shared bike' is the correct noun phrase. Suggestion: replace incorrect word and choose a verb phrase that matches the action of traveling to study.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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