BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I don't have a bicycle when I was child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think bikes are popular in my country.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: ข้อผิดพลาดหลักคือไวยากรณ์และความเป็นธรรมชาติของประโยค ควรใช้รูปอดีตกาลที่ถูกต้อง (had) และโครงสร้างประโยคที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น นอกจากนี้ควรเพิ่มประโยคหัวข้อและรายละเอียดเสริมสั้น ๆ รวมทั้งเชื่อมประโยคด้วยคำเชื่อม เช่น 'but' หรือ 'so' เพื่อความลื่นไหล

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bicycle when I was a child. I usually walked to school with my friends, but sometimes we borrowed bikes from neighbors for short rides.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: คำตอบเข้าใจได้แต่ค่อนข้างสั้นและขาดรายละเอียด ควรเริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลหรือรายละเอียดเฉพาะเจาะจง ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น 'because' หรือ 'for example' เพื่อทำให้คำตอบมีโครงสร้างและชัดเจนกว่าเดิม และใช้คำศัพท์ที่หลากหลายกว่าเช่น 'common' 'widely used'

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see many commuters and students riding bikes to avoid traffic.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I don't have a bicycle when I was child.

I didn't have a bicycle when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'didn't have' to match the past context. Also add the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: Use past simple for past situations: 'I didn't have a bicycle when I was a child.'

Present tense issue

× I think bikes are popular in my country.

I think bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Think' is present simple expressing a current opinion, and the rest of the structure is correct. No change needed.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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