Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (tense and subject-verb agreement), make the response more natural and concise, and add one specific supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then briefly explain the current situation and why it is helpful using a linking word.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I recently bought a scooty with my own savings, and it has been very useful because it helps me commute to work quickly and saves on taxi fares.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more fluent and specific. Use clearer subject references, correct grammar, and one or two specific examples of how people use bikes. Use a linking word to connect the general statement and the reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many people use motorcycles to commute to work and to quickly run errands like buying groceries, especially in crowded city streets.

× No, when I am a child I don't have any bike, but currently I bought a scooty with my own money.

✓ No, when I was a child I didn't have any bike, but recently I bought a scooty with my own money.

Tense errors: 'when I am a child' refers to past and should be 'when I was a child' (past tense). 'I don't have any bike' should match past: 'I didn't have any bike'. 'Currently I bought' mixes present adverb with past tense; use 'recently I bought' or 'I have recently bought' to be consistent. Also 'any bike' is acceptable but 'a bike' is more natural. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past time references and match time adverbs to verb tense.

× It's very helpful to me.

✓ It is very helpful to me.

Minor register: 'It's' is a contraction but grammatically acceptable; however in spoken answers full form 'It is very helpful to me' is clearer. No tense error; keep present simple because the scooty is currently helpful.

× Yes, in my country bikes are very popular because it's used for their use for their works, like going to some places or going to buy any household things etcetera.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are very popular because they are used for many purposes, such as going to different places or buying household items.

Pronoun and reference errors: 'it's' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use 'they are'. Phrase 'used for their use for their works' is redundant and unclear; replace with 'used for many purposes' or 'used for work'. 'Going to some places' is imprecise; 'going to different places' is better. 'Going to buy any household things' is ungrammatical; 'buying household items' is concise and natural. Maintain present simple for general facts.