Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Hi. Hello.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people like bike biking.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答没有直接回应问题,且完全没有提供有关童年是否有自行车的信息。请在开头用一句主题句直接回答问题(有或没有),然后用一到两句具体细节支持,比如谁给的、什么时候开始骑或骑车的频率。回答应自然、简洁,最多5句,并使用连接词使叙述连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, a small red one my parents bought for me. I rode it to the park almost every afternoon, which helped me become more confident and independent.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答基本回应了问题但不够具体且有语法/用词问题(“bike biking”不自然)。应先简短明确回答,然后用1–2句具体支持细节,使用连接词(for example, because, especially)并用恰当词汇如 “cycling” 或 “riding bikes”。尽量提供具体数据、场景或原因使回答更有说服力。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think cycling is very popular in my country because many cities have dedicated bike lanes. For example, commuters often ride bikes to work to avoid traffic, and weekend markets attract many people cycling with their families.
× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people like bike biking.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people like biking.
句中出现了冗余或不正确的搭配“bike biking”。动词like后接动名词biking即可表示“喜欢骑自行车”。“bike”作为名词与动名词并列构成的短语不符合英语习惯,导致语法错误。建议:使用like + 动名词(如 like biking / like to ride a bike),或使用名词短语(like riding bikes / like to ride bikes)。