Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I just have a bike and it was a small pink bike and it was my dad who taught me how to use it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Well, I don't think so, because the cities are not designed for cyclists, but for cars instead in Istanbul.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Make the response grammatically correct, more natural, and slightly more detailed. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and wording, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike when I was a child, and my dad taught me how to ride it, so I learned very quickly.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Be concise and provide a clear opinion sentence followed by a specific reason and one example or consequence. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and avoid vague phrasing. Keep the answer within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think they are very popular because many cities in Turkey, especially Istanbul, are designed for cars rather than cyclists, so people rarely choose bikes for daily travel.

Ngữ pháp

Verb tense / auxiliary error (Present vs Past)

× Yes, I just have a bike and it was a small pink bike and it was my dad who taught me how to use it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike; it was a small pink bike, and it was my dad who taught me how to use it.

The question asks about having a bike when you were a child, which requires past tense. 'I just have a bike' incorrectly uses present tense. Change 'have' to past 'had'. Also using a semicolon or commas improves sentence flow. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for actions in the past and link clauses clearly (e.g., 'I had a bike. It was a small pink bike, and my dad taught me to use it.').

Incorrect use of prepositions / sentence structure

× Well, I don't think so, because the cities are not designed for cyclists, but for cars instead in Istanbul.

✓ Well, I don't think so, because in Istanbul the cities are designed for cars rather than for cyclists.

Placement of 'in Istanbul' at the end makes the sentence slightly awkward. Also the phrasing 'but for cars instead' is wordy. Reordering to 'in Istanbul the cities are designed for cars rather than for cyclists' clarifies meaning and improves preposition and sentence structure. Suggestion: place time/place phrases near the start or before the verb phrase and use 'rather than' for clear comparison.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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