Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child and actually everyone in my family had a π had a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think bikes were popular before I was born, but when uh, I was a child, usually people go to work or to school by bus or public transportation.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid repetitions or hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Pronounce clearly and avoid filler sounds or accidental symbols. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, almost everyone in my family owned one, so we often rode together on weekends which helped me learn balance and confidence.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use linking words to contrast past and present. Remove hesitations and make the time reference clear. Provide one specific reason or example to support your view.

Ví dụ: I think bicycles used to be more popular in the past, but now most people commute by bus or other public transport. For example, when I was a child many families preferred buses because they were faster and more convenient for long distances.

Ngữ pháp

Redundant auxiliary and word choice

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child and actually everyone in my family had a π had a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and actually everyone in my family had a bike.

The sentence uses an unnecessary auxiliary 'did' with the affirmative past tense; in affirmative past statements use simple past ('I had') not 'I did have' unless for emphasis. Also there is an accidental repetition 'had a π had a' and an unexpected character. Suggest removing the extra auxiliary and the duplicate fragment to make a clear past-tense statement. Use commas to join clauses cleanly.'

Tense consistency and subject-verb agreement

× I think bikes were popular before I was born, but when uh, I was a child, usually people go to work or to school by bus or public transportation.

✓ I think bikes were popular before I was born, but when I was a child, people usually went to work or to school by bus or other public transportation.

This sentence mixes past and present tenses and has an incorrect verb form for the time frame. The speaker refers to 'when I was a child' (past), so the habitual action should use past simple 'went' rather than present 'go'. Also adverb order: 'people usually went' is more natural than 'usually people go'. Replace 'public transportation' with 'other public transportation' or keep 'public transportation' — here 'other' clarifies alternatives. Remove filler 'uh' in formal correction. Ensure tense consistency throughout the sentence.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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