Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, but now have a electric bike can. Instead the bike to travel.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且简短,但过于简短,缺乏细节和扩展。为了提高得分,应在主题句后添加一到两句具体细节(例如什么时候有的、用来做什么、与谁一起骑或你的感受),并使用连接词使表达更自然。注意句子长度不要超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven and used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood. I loved riding with my friends on weekends, which made those memories really special.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 答案语法错误较多,表达不清晰。需要先给出直接回答的主题句,然后用一到两句具体支持理由(比如电动自行车变得更流行、原因和影响),并使用连词如“because”或“so”来衔接。注意使用正确时态和词序,保持句子简洁且自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are still popular, but electric bikes have become much more common recently because they are faster and easier for longer distances. As a result, many people now choose electric bikes instead of traditional bicycles for daily travel.
× Yes, but now have a electric bike can. Instead the bike to travel.
✓ Yes, but now people can have an electric bike. They use it instead of a regular bike to travel.
句子结构混乱且缺少主语与动词的正确位置。原句“now have a electric bike can”缺少主语(例如people)并且助动词“can”放错位置;“a electric”中冠词与辅音发音冲突应为“an electric”,但更自然的表达是使用复数或泛指people。第二部分“Instead the bike to travel”缺少谓语,正确应为“They use it instead of a regular bike to travel.” 改进建议:1) 明确主语(如 people / many people / people in my country);2) 助动词 should follow主语(people can have...);3) 使用正确冠词 an electric bike 或改写为 electric bikes 或 a regular bike 并补全谓语(use/ride)。以上解释和建议均为简体中文。