Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., repeating "drive a bike") and filler words like "umm." Also vary vocabulary (use "ride" instead of repeating "drive") and correct small inaccuracies ("drive a bike" → "ride a bike").

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Although I tried to learn to ride one, I found it difficult because I lacked balance and practice, so I never became confident. For that reason, I'm not motivated to learn now.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear direct answer first, then add specific supporting details and use linking words for coherence. Remove hesitations and correct collocations (say "public transportation" not "public transportations"). Give one or two concrete examples or comparisons (e.g., cycling lanes, bike-sharing schemes) to strengthen your response.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular where I live. For example, many people use bikes for short trips because there are dedicated cycling lanes and a bike-sharing scheme in the city. As a result, cycling is a common and convenient alternative to buses and cars.

× No, unfortunately I never had a bike when I was a child and I don't know how to drive a bike honestly.

✓ No, unfortunately I never had a bike when I was a child, and I don't know how to ride a bike, honestly.

The verb 'drive' is incorrect for bicycles; use 'ride'. Also add a comma before the conjunction to join independent clauses. Maintain present tense 'don't know' for current ability and past 'never had' for possession as a child.

× And I tried really to learn how to drive a bike but I found it very difficult and I'm not really interested in learning how to drive a bike right now.

✓ And I really tried to learn how to ride a bike, but I found it very difficult, and I'm not really interested in learning to ride a bike right now.

Use 'tried to' + base verb, not 'tried really to'. Replace 'drive' with 'ride'. Use parallel infinitive forms: 'learning to ride' is more natural than 'learning how to drive' here. Add commas for clarity.

× Where I live, biking is very popular and it's 1, is considered one of the most important, umm, methods of public, of, of traveling around in the city.

✓ Where I live, biking is very popular and is considered one of the most important methods of public travel around the city.

Remove extraneous fillers ('1, umm, of, of, of') and correct noun phrase: 'methods of public travel' is more natural than 'methods of public of traveling'. Keep verb agreement 'is considered' with singular 'biking'.

× It says like people, people, they either use public transportations or they ride in our bikes.

✓ Like I said, people either use public transportation or they ride bikes.

Remove repetition and incorrect 'transportations' (uncountable 'transportation'). 'Ride in our bikes' is incorrect; say 'ride bikes' or 'ride their bikes'. Also 'It says like' is nonstandard; 'Like I said' is clearer.

× And uh, it's actually very popular and it's everywhere.

✓ And it's actually very popular and everywhere.

Sentence is grammatical but slightly redundant; removing the repeated 'it's' creates smoother present-tense description. Both clauses describe current, general facts so present tense is appropriate.