Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: answer directly with correct tense, avoid repetition and filler words, and organize into 2–3 concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. For example, use past simple consistently for childhood events, replace fillers (“uh”, “that uh”) with pauses, and give a specific time period or effect on health.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I used to borrow a bicycle from my neighbor and rode it almost every day, which helped improve my fitness and made playing outside a regular habit.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and coherent: give a clear opinion, follow with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, therefore), and avoid unclear phrases like “they don't book.” Use correct nouns and collocations such as “use bikes for transportation” and give a concrete example or contrast.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, many people cycle to work or to the market to avoid traffic and save money on public transport.

× No, I did not have a bike when I am child, but I have a bicycle when I'm a child and I ride that every day.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle when I was a child and I rode it every day.

The sentence mixes past and present forms. Use past tense 'was' for 'when I was a child' (not 'am'), and 'had' and 'rode' to keep actions in the past. Also replace 'that' with the pronoun 'it' for a singular countable noun. Suggestion: keep all verbs referring to past events in past tense to maintain consistency. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yes, I think bikes are most popular in our countries.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are most popular in our country.

The speaker likely refers to their own country (singular). Use singular 'country' not 'countries'. Also 'most popular' can remain but consider 'very popular' or 'quite popular' depending on intended meaning. Ensure subject and noun number match the intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× People use that to trans uh, transport system.

✓ People use them for transportation.

'That' is incorrect reference; use 'them' to refer to 'bikes' (plural). 'To transport system' is ungrammatical; use the noun 'transportation' or the phrase 'for transportation'. Keep pronoun and noun forms consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× People can travel from one place to another easily uh, and from not wasting their time because they have their personal vehicle.

✓ People can travel from one place to another easily and do not waste time because they have their own vehicles.

The original has a fragmented structure 'and from not wasting'. Recast to a clear coordinated clause: 'and do not waste time'. Use 'their own vehicles' instead of 'their personal vehicle' to match plural 'people' or use 'a personal vehicle' if singular. Keep parallel structure in coordinated clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× So, so they don't book.

✓ So they don't need to book transportation.

The repetition 'So, so' is informal/filler and unclear. 'They don't book' lacks an object; clarify what they don't book (e.g., 'transportation' or 'tickets'). Use a full clause to convey meaning. Remove filler repetition for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 16