Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve tense consistency, sentence structure and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, use one or two supporting details, and avoid repeating words. Use linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a beautiful blue bike that my father gave me. I used to ride it to the park every weekend, and I remember feeling very proud because it was my favorite possession.

Gợi ý: Work on grammar (subject–verb agreement, sentence fragments) and clarity. Give a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason with linking words and an example. Avoid repetition and finish the sentence logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite common in my country because many people cannot afford cars. For example, students and low-income workers often use bicycles for short trips to work or school as they are cheap and convenient.

× Yes I do. When I was a child I remember I had a beautiful bike, a blue color, and it was given to me by my dad.

✓ Yes I did. When I was a child I remember having a beautiful blue bike that my dad gave me.

The response to 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' requires past tense 'did' rather than present 'do' (present tense issue). Also, sentence flow and verb forms need correction: 'I remember I had' is grammatical but more natural as 'I remember having'. 'A blue color' is incorrect adjective usage; use 'a blue bike' and change passive 'it was given to me by my dad' to active 'my dad gave me' for concision and naturalness.

× Yes it do, because in the majority of population doesn't have don't have in. The enough money to buy a car so we use a bike as a.

✓ Yes it does, because the majority of the population does not have enough money to buy a car, so we use bikes instead.

Multiple errors: 'Yes it do' is subject-verb agreement; for singular 'it' use 'does'. The phrase should be 'the majority of the population' with correct article and word order (article errors / incorrect use of prepositions). 'Doesn't have don't have in.' contains redundant negatives and extraneous words; correct to 'does not have'. 'The enough money' is wrong determiner use; use 'enough money' without 'the'. 'We use a bike as a.' is incomplete and unnatural; use plural 'bikes' or 'a bike' consistently and finish thought: 'so we use bikes instead.' The overall corrections align with subject-verb agreement, article and sentence structure improvements.