Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes I do bike is very popular in my countries. Uh, for uh, the main reason is when I was a child, I often go to my friend house. I often.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 文法と時制の誤りを直し、より自然で簡潔な一文を使いましょう。例えば過去の習慣を述べるときは過去形を用い、必要なら補足で詳細を加えます。具体的には “I had a bike when I was a child.” のようにし、その後に短い補足を加えるなら接続詞(and, so, because)や副詞(often, usually)を使って流れを良くします。
Ví dụ: I had a bike when I was a child. It was a simple blue bicycle, and I rode it to my friend’s house almost every day.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 答えは短く明確にし、その後に具体的な理由をつけて述べましょう。文法(主語・時制・複数形)と流暢さを改善し、接続詞(because, so, therefore)や頻度の副詞(often, usually)を使って論理的に繋げます。例えば “Yes, bikes are popular in my country because…” と始め、具体例や統計的背景、個人的経験を一つ添えると良いです。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or visit friends, especially in smaller towns where traffic is light.
× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
The sentence mixes present simple ('have') with a past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use the past tense 'had' to match the past time. Suggestion: use past tense for actions or possessions that occurred in the past ('I had').
× Yes I do bike is very popular in my countries.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.
Multiple errors: 'do bike' is ungrammatical and 'countries' should be singular 'country' to match typical context. Correct subject-verb agreement: plural subject 'bikes' with plural verb 'are'. Also use 'my country' unless you mean multiple countries. Suggestion: say 'Bikes are very popular in my country.'
× Uh, for uh, the main reason is when I was a child, I often go to my friend house.
✓ The main reason is that when I was a child, I often went to my friend's house.
The clause 'when I was a child' requires past tense in the subordinate verb: use 'went' not 'go'. Also 'friend house' needs possessive form 'friend's house'. Keep 'The main reason is that' to introduce the explanation. Suggestion: use past tense verbs and correct possessive forms ('my friend's house').
× I often.
✓ I often rode my bike to my friend's house.
Fragment: 'I often.' is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. Provide a full clause specifying the repeated action in the past. Suggestion: complete the sentence with a past verb and object, e.g. 'I often rode my bike to my friend's house.'