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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course, I had a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, in China bikes are very popular, especially in my area. I was. I am living in Hangzhou and in my living area there are a lot of people using bikes. We can rent bikes easily.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且自然,但过于简短且缺乏细节。可以在主题句后补充一两句具体信息(比如什么时候得到、谁给的、常去哪儿骑或对你的意义),并使用连接词使陈述更流畅。注意句子数量控制在5句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present from my parents when I was eight, and I usually rode it to visit my friends or to go to the park. Riding taught me independence and helped me explore the neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 答案主题明确但表达不够连贯,有语法或口误(如“I was.”不完整),细节可以更具体(比如提到共享单车品牌、使用场景或原因)。建议用连接词(for example, because, therefore)使句子连贯,并避免断句或不完整句。控制在最多5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in my city. For example, in Hangzhou there are many shared bikes and people use them to commute to work or run errands. Because bike-sharing apps make renting so convenient, cycling is a common and practical choice for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I am living in Hangzhou and in my living area there are a lot of people using bikes.

I live in Hangzhou, and in my neighborhood a lot of people use bikes.

问题类型:现在时态问题(Present tense issue)。说明:原句中使用“I am living”带有进行时,表示正在发生的动作或暂时状态,但谈论居住地点通常用一般现在时“I live”表示长期或习惯性事实;另外短语“in my living area”不地道,改为“in my neighborhood”更自然;“there are a lot of people using bikes”可简化为“a lot of people use bikes”以保持一般现在时的一致性。建议:谈论长期情况或习惯时用一般现在时,避免将静态状态误用进行时;使用更自然的地点表达(如 neighborhood)。

Present tense issue

× We can rent bikes easily.

We can rent bikes easily.

问题类型:现在时态问题(Present tense issue)。说明:该句语法本身正确;使用情态动词 can + 动词原形表示能力或可能性,和上下文一致。因此不需要更改。建议:保持此类句型,用于表达能力或可能性时很自然。

Present tense issue

× Yes, in China bikes are very popular, especially in my area. I was.

Yes, in China bikes are very popular, especially in my area.

问题类型:现在时态问题(Present tense issue)。说明:原句末尾多出“I was.”,该短句不完整且与上下文时态不符,应删除。上下文在询问当前普及程度,应使用一般现在时“are very popular”。建议:注意不要在句子中插入无关或不完整的短句,确保时态一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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