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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where many people use them for commuting. For example, when I was a child, my father didn't allow me to ride a bike because I couldn't balance properly and hadn't learned how to ride yet.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Be careful to answer in the correct tense and expand slightly to make the response natural and informative. Use past tense for past situations, start with a clear topic sentence, and add one or two brief supporting details (reason or consequence). Keep it under five sentences and avoid single-word answers.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was too dangerous for me at that age, so they preferred I learn to walk and play in the park instead.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: Good: direct answer, relevant example, and some detail. Improve by using clearer linking words, staying focused on the question (popularity), and keeping examples concise and directly related. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., commute, cycling culture, bike lanes) and avoid personal anecdote that distracts from the general picture unless tied back to popularity.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in urban areas where people use them to commute to work and school. For instance, many cities have dedicated bike lanes and rental schemes, which encourages cycling as a cheap and convenient way to travel.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect verb tense (present vs past)

× No, I don't.

No, I didn't.

The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which is past tense. The student's response uses present tense 'don't' which is inconsistent. Use the past tense auxiliary 'did' with the base verb 'do' to answer past questions. Suggestion: match the question's tense, so answer 'No, I didn't.' or 'No, I did not.'

Present perfect vs past simple issue (listed as Past tense issue)

× my father didn't allow me to ride a bike because I couldn't balance properly and hadn't learned how to ride yet.

my father didn't allow me to ride a bike because I couldn't balance properly and hadn't learned how to ride yet.

This sentence is already correct: the first clause uses past simple 'didn't allow' to describe a past decision, 'couldn't balance' correctly uses past ability, and 'hadn't learned' (past perfect) correctly indicates an action not completed before that past point. No change is needed. (Included here to confirm no error under the provided grammar problem types.)

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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