Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds like “Umm” and vague phrases like “this is the reason.” Explain the reason briefly (e.g., family circumstances or lack of interest) and how that affected you.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Because my family lived in a small apartment and we didn’t have space to store one, I never learned to ride, so I only started practicing as an adult.

Gợi ý: Give a clearer topic sentence and add specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., because, for example, therefore). Use concrete evidence (commuting, sport, or delivery bikes) rather than vague references to videos to make the answer more convincing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, cities now have dedicated cycling lanes and bike-sharing schemes, and you can often see couriers delivering parcels by bike during the day.

× No, I did not have a bike when I was a child. Umm, this is the reason why I did not learn how to ride it.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, so I did not learn how to ride one.

The original uses an awkward clause 'this is the reason why' that is unnecessary and wordy; also 'ride it' is unclear because 'bike' is countable and should be referred to as 'one'. Combine the ideas into a single coherent sentence using a conjunction (so) to show cause and effect. Suggestion: avoid filler phrases like 'Umm' in formal answers and use pronoun 'one' for previously mentioned countable nouns. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I think they are. I've seen a lot of videos showcasing people riding their own bikes, learning it and enjoying.

✓ Yes, I think they are. I've seen a lot of videos showcasing people riding their own bikes, learning to ride them and enjoying themselves.

The list of participial phrases is inconsistent and contains pronoun errors. 'Learning it' is incorrect because 'learn to ride' is the correct verb pattern; use 'them' to refer back to 'bikes' (plural), and 'enjoying' should have a reflexive or object 'themselves' to be complete. Also maintain parallel structure in the series: 'riding', 'learning to ride', 'enjoying themselves'. Grammar problem type ID:10