Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct tense and connect ideas with linking words. Keep answer natural and concise (maximum 4–5 sentences). Add one or two specific details about learning (where, who taught you, how long it took) and use past simple consistently when describing completed actions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eight, and it took me several weeks to learn to ride it properly. My older cousin taught me in a park near my home, and at first I fell a few times, but gradually I gained confidence. By the end of the summer I could ride confidently and felt very proud.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct opinion, then support it with specific reasons and examples, and use linking words to make the answer coherent. Use present simple for general facts and be more precise (e.g., types of people who use bikes, typical journeys). Avoid vague phrases like 'it's very good.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are still very popular in China. Many people use them for short trips to work or school because they are affordable and often faster than cars in busy cities. For example, in my city many students and commuters cycle to the subway station every day. Therefore bikes remain an important part of daily transport.

× I had my first bike at the age of 8 and I have tried.

✓ I got my first bike at the age of 8 and I tried to ride it.

The original mixes past perfect ('had') and present perfect ('have tried') inconsistently. Use simple past to narrate past events in sequence. Also 'have tried' lacks object; 'ride it' clarifies action. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past actions in a story ('got', 'tried to ride it').

× I had tried to do it for many times.

✓ I tried to do it many times.

Using past perfect 'had tried' is unnecessary when narrating past sequence; simple past 'tried' is correct. Also 'for many times' is unnatural; use 'many times' or 'several times'. Suggestion: use simple past for repeated past attempts ('tried many times').

× At last I could control it well and I felt very happy.

✓ At last I could control it well, and I felt very happy.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but needs a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses. The verbs 'could' and 'felt' correctly use past tense to continue the narrative. Suggestion: add comma for clarity and flow.

× In China almost everyone could ride bike.

✓ In China almost everyone could ride a bike.

Missing article before 'bike' and awkward verb 'could' is acceptable past ability but here general statement about ability/popularity should use simple present 'can'. Also 'bike' needs an article. Suggestion: for general facts use 'can ride a bike' or 'can ride bikes'.

× It's very convenient for us to go to the near place.

✓ It's very convenient for us to go to nearby places.

The phrase 'the near place' is unidiomatic. Use adjective 'nearby' and plural 'places' for general trips. Also 'to go' with 'nearby places' is natural. Suggestion: use 'go to nearby places' or 'travel short distances'.