Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer gives relevant information but has many grammar and word-choice errors, some redundancy, and unclear phrases. To improve: 1) Begin with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question. 2) Use correct verb forms and simple sentence structures (past simple). 3) Remove unnecessary repetition and unclear words (e.g., “buy”, “rush”, “training group”). 4) Add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word (for example, “and” or “so”) to keep the response coherent. Try to keep it under 4–5 sentences. Example corrections: use “I had a small bicycle with training wheels,” “my parents bought it for me,” and “I rode it every afternoon in the park until I learned to ride without the wheels.”

Ví dụ: I had a small bicycle with training wheels when I was a child. My parents bought it for me, and I used to ride it every afternoon in the park. After several weeks of practice, I learned to ride without the training wheels and felt very proud.

Gợi ý: This response repeats the examiner’s question instead of answering. To improve: 1) Answer directly with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason). 2) Provide one or two specific supporting details or examples using linking words like “because” or “for example.” 3) Use correct vocabulary and singular/plural forms (“bikes” not “bias”). Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, commuters in the city often cycle to work, and there are many bike lanes in parks and near schools.

× That I have a buy.

✓ That is a bike I had.

The original is ungrammatical and contains wrong word choice ('buy' instead of 'bike') and incorrect word order. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Suggestion: use a clear subject + verb + object order and correct noun: 'That is a bike I had.' or more naturally 'That was a bike I had.' if referring to the past.

× When I was a child it was a small rush bicycle with training wheels that my parents, both for me and I used to ride it every afternoon around the park until I learned to ride without the training group.

✓ When I was a child, it was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for me, and I used to ride it every afternoon around the park until I learned to ride without the training wheels.

This sentence has multiple problems: wrong adjective 'rush' instead of 'red' (word choice), incorrect verb 'bought' missing, incorrect pronoun phrase 'both for me and I' and awkward clause 'training group'. Main errors fall under incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and sentence structure (ID 26). Fixes: use correct verb 'bought', correct object pronoun 'me' not 'I' after preposition, join clauses with 'and', and use 'training wheels' consistently. Also replace 'training group' with 'training wheels' and add commas for clarity.

× Do you think bias are some popular in the country?

✓ Do you think bicycles are popular in the country?

The original has mis-spelled noun 'bias' and an unnecessary word 'some', creating a sentence structure error (ID 26). Correct the noun to 'bicycles' (plural) and remove 'some'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'bicycles are'. Suggestion: 'Do you think bicycles are popular in the country?'