Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “No, I didn’t have a bike as a child.”), avoid incorrect or irrelevant words (e.g., “bad back bike”), and reduce hesitations. Provide one or two specific details (reason or memory) using linking words (e.g., “because,” “so,” “however”) to make the reply coherent. Keep the answer under five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought I was too young to ride safely. As a result, I mainly walked to school or rode the bus, and I only learned to ride a bike when I was twelve.

Gợi ý: Make your response grammatically accurate and more specific. Begin with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.”). Use linking words to add supporting points (e.g., “for example,” “because,” “also”) and give precise details: mention types of bikes (shared bikes), reasons for popularity (convenience, traffic), and typical users. Avoid filler words and correct common collocations (e.g., “shared bikes,” “people,” “after work or to school”).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, in Shanghai there are many shared bikes that people use because they are convenient for short trips and help avoid traffic. Students and office workers often ride them to school or to nearby subway stations.

× Well, actually, I didn't possess a bad back bike when I was a child because as far as I could remember, I could not, uh, walk a bike when I was in my childhood.

✓ Well, actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because, as far as I can remember, I couldn't ride a bike when I was a child.

Multiple article and word choice errors: 'possess a bad back bike' is incorrect and unnatural; 'have a bike' or 'own a bike' is correct. 'As far as I could remember' should be present 'as far as I can remember' when recalling past facts. 'Could not ... walk a bike' is incorrect verb choice; use 'ride a bike'. Also simplify 'when I was in my childhood' to 'when I was a child'. Suggestions: use natural verbs (have/own, ride), use 'as far as I can remember' for memory about the past, and avoid redundant phrasing.

× Yeah, I think bike is definitely popular in my country I live in.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are definitely popular in the country where I live.

Singular/plural and word order issues: 'bike is' should be plural 'bikes are' to refer to bikes in general. Also 'in my country I live in' is awkward; 'in the country where I live' is clearer. Suggestions: use plural when speaking about general popularity of a category and place modifiers in a natural order.

× I grew up in Shanghai and there are many like sharing bag bikes which every people could use maybe after work or go to school.

✓ I grew up in Shanghai, and there are many shared bikes that people can use, maybe after work or to go to school.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'like sharing bag bikes' is incorrect — use 'shared bikes' or 'bike-sharing bikes'. 'Which every people' is wrong; use 'that people' or 'which everyone'. 'Could use maybe after work or go to school' has wrong modal and missing preposition before 'go'; use 'people can use, maybe after work or to go to school.' Suggestions: use correct compound noun 'shared bikes' and correct prepositions ('to go to school'), and use 'people' or 'everyone' without 'every' before a plural noun.