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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I haven't.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, because uh, everyone go to work by this and it is also an entertainment.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答时态和形式不正确,且太简短。应直接用过去时说明情况并给出简短原因或细节以丰富答案。例如可以说你是否借过别人的车或为什么没有。注意句子数不超过5句,保持自然。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in the city and we usually walked or took the bus, so my parents didn't buy one for me. Sometimes I borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride in the park.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 表达有语法和用词错误,口语中犹豫词(uh)应减少。回答应更具体并使用连接词来组织细节,比如说明哪些人群更常骑车、在何种情况下和作为娱乐的例子。保持自然且不冗长。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short commutes to work or school because they are cheap and flexible. In addition, cycling is a common leisure activity at weekends, especially in parks and along rivers.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of verb tense/auxiliary (Present perfect used instead of Past simple)

× No, I haven't.

No, I didn't.

学生回答问题“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”使用了现在完成时(I haven't),而问题是过去时的“Did”,要求用过去时回答。正确用法是过去简单:"No, I didn't."。建议:在回答以“Did”开头的过去时问题时,用过去时态(did/didn't + 动词原形)来回答。

Subject-verb agreement and verb choice

× Yes, because uh, everyone go to work by this and it is also an entertainment.

Yes, because, uh, everyone goes to work on them, and they are also a form of entertainment.

原句有以下问题: 1) 主谓一致:主语 everyone 是单数,谓语应为 goes(而不是 go)。 2) 代词与指代不清:原句用 this 指代自行车不恰当,且单复数不一致,改为 them(泛指单辆自行车作为交通工具时常用复数或用单数形式 a bicycle);也可改为"bicycles"并用"them"。 3) 词汇/搭配:常用短语是 "go to work by bicycle" 或 "go to work on them",不说 "by this"。 4) 冠词/数:"it is also an entertainment" 听起来不自然,应改为复数/不可数表达:"they are also a form of entertainment" 或 "bicycling is also a form of entertainment"。 建议:使用 everyone + 单数动词;用合适的介词短语表达交通工具(by bicycle / on them);把娱乐表述改为更自然的短语(a form of entertainment / recreational)。

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