Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes. I think I'm a partner in my department.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 你的回答过于简短且时态错误。应该直接回应并扩展细节,比如说明是否真的有车、什么时候拥有、在哪里骑以及与你童年相关的记忆。此外注意时态,描述过去事件应使用过去时并使用连接词使回答更连贯。建议回答不超过5句,每句简洁自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. It helped me learn balance and gave me a lot of independence, especially when visiting friends or going to the park.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有直接回答问题且包含无关内容(“I think I'm a partner in my department”与问题无关)。应先给出明确立场,然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持观点,使用连接词(because, for example)以保持逻辑性。保持自然语言并避免跑题。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and several bike-sharing schemes that make cycling convenient for students and office workers.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
原句为回答过去式问题(Did you have...?),应使用过去时。学生使用现在完成时(I have)不符合语境。建议:在被问到过去发生的事情时使用过去式,如 'I did' 或具体说明 'Yes, I had a bike.'(是 had 而不是 have)。
× Yes. I think I'm a partner in my department.
✓ Yes. I think bicycles are popular in my country.
原句与提问无关,题问是否认为自行车在你的国家流行,学生回答谈论自己是部门合伙人,属于句子结构和语义偏离(Sentence structure errors)。建议:直接回答问题并说明原因,例如 'Yes. I think bicycles are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and they are affordable.'(是的。我认为自行车在我国很受欢迎,因为很多人用于短途出行且价格实惠)。