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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No I didn't, more people choice car or E bikes because they are comfortable and faster than bikes.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且自然,但过于简短,缺乏细节和扩展。建议给出一个主题句后补充具体细节,比如什么时候有、经常骑到哪里、谁教的或最喜欢的记忆,使用连接词使回答更连贯。保持不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it almost every day to a nearby park. My father taught me how to balance and I remember feeling very proud when I could ride without training wheels. It was my main way to play with friends and explore the neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答存在语法错误、时态和用词不当(如用didn't来谈现在情况),信息也不够具体。建议用正确时态直接回答问题,提供具体原因和比较,并用连接词(for example, because, however)组织句子。增加细节如城市与乡村差异或流行趋势会更好。

Ví dụ: Not really. Nowadays most people prefer cars or electric bikes because they are more comfortable and faster for commuting. For example, in big cities many people choose e-bikes to avoid traffic, while in rural areas cars are more common due to long distances. However, cycling is still popular among students and hobbyists for exercise.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× No I didn't, more people choice car or E bikes because they are comfortable and faster than bikes.

No, I don't. More people choose cars or e-bikes because they are more comfortable and faster than bicycles.

错误类型:过去时使用不当。学生原句用“No I didn't”与后半句时态和事实不符,询问的是现在普遍情况,应使用一般现在时;另外动词“choice”误用为名词,正确动词为“choose”,复数与冠词也有问题。建议:在谈论现在的普遍事实时使用一般现在时(例如“do/does/choose”);名词与动词要区分,注意可数名词复数形式(cars, e-bikes, bicycles),并在句首“No”之后加逗号和空格提高可读性。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
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