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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child and I really love riding it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: 句子时态和语法不准确,回答也过于简短且缺乏具体细节。建议在开头直接用过去时给出主题句(I did / I had),然后用一两句具体细节支持,例如什么时候、和谁一起骑、最喜欢的地方或一次难忘的经历。使用连词(for example, when, because)使表达更连贯。整体控制在最多五句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it almost every afternoon, usually with my older brother around our neighborhood. For example, we often raced to the park and I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without training wheels. It was a simple but joyful part of my childhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,没有说明理由或举例,不符合“提供具体细节”的要求。建议先用一句完整的主题句(Yes, they are / No, they are not),然后用一到两句解释原因并举例,例如在城市里用作通勤、骑行文化、天气或基础设施等。使用连接词如 because, for example, therefore 让回应更有逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and avoid traffic; for example, students and office workers often cycle to work or school on dedicated bike lanes.

Ngữ pháp

There be issue

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child and I really love riding it.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I really loved riding it.

错误类型:There be issue(此处为时态与存在表述错误)。 原因与建议:句子中主问是过去时(Did you have...? / when I was a child),因此回答中表述拥有应使用过去时的动词 had 而不是现在时 do have。句中 also 表达对过去习惯性的喜爱应使用过去时 loved 而不是现在时 love。建议把“do have”改为过去式“had”,并把“love”改为过去式“loved”,使时态保持一致,符合英语过去时间的表达。

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