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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you are a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, it's very popular cause in China we now have some, uh, shared bag. You can write those back in the street and when you, uh, go to your, uh, your home, you just, uh, buy, yeah.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 首先,注意准确理解并复述考官的问题,避免时态错误。你的回答没有真正回答问题,应该直接陈述过去是否有自行车,然后给出简短理由或细节。语言上要简单明了,句子不超过五句,避免重复填充词(如 uh)。例如可以用一到两句说明是否有,再用一两句补充细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle from when I was seven until I was twelve. I used it to ride to school and play with friends in the park, and it helped me become more independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答时注意逻辑与用词准确。首先直接回答(Yes/No + 简短理由),然后用有条理的支持细节,避免语法和词汇错误(如 'shared bag' 应为 'shared bikes','write' 应为 'ride')。减少填充词,使用连接词使句子连贯。例如给出流行的原因、一个例子和影响。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China. One reason is the widespread availability of shared bikes, which you can rent from the street using an app. This makes short trips convenient and reduces traffic, especially in big cities.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue

× Did you have a bike when you are a child?

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

句子使用了过去时的助动词“Did”,表示是在询问过去的情况,但从句却用了现在时“are a child”,时态不一致。应把从句改为过去时“were a child”。建议:当主句是过去时,时间状语从句也要使用过去时,注意主从句时态一致。

6: Present tense issue

× Yeah, it's very popular cause in China we now have some, uh, shared bag. You can write those back in the street and when you, uh, go to your, uh, your home, you just, uh, buy, yeah.

Yeah, they're very popular because in China we now have some shared bikes. You can ride those back in the street and when you go home, you just, uh, pay (or rent) them, yeah.

原句有多处时态和词形使用不当: 1) 主语与谓语配合:指“bikes”应使用复数代词“they”而不是“it's”。 2) 名词错误:原文用“shared bag”应为“shared bikes”。 3) 动词形式错误:“write”应为“ride”(骑车),属于动词选择错误并影响现在时表达。句子整体在说当前事实,应使用一般现在时(we now have, you can ride)。 4) 句尾表达不清,“buy”不符合共享单车的使用,应改为“pay”或“rent/them”。 建议:注意主语单复数一致,使用正确的名词,选择恰当动词并保持现在时描述当前习惯或事实。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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