Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's purring, it's popular monster young people and free to bike Harry oh everyday work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且自然,但过于简短。根据评分标准,应先用主题句直接回答,然后补充一两句具体细节以丰富内容。建议在一句话里说明是否拥有以及持续时间或使用频率,再用一到两句带连接词(例如: because, so, when)说明原因或回忆细节。例如可提到你骑车的目的、和谁一起骑或一次难忘的经历。注意保持句子不超过5句并避免冗长。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle from the age of six until I was about twelve, and I used it almost every day to ride to the park. Because my parents lived nearby, I often rode with my friends after school, which helped me learn balance and confidence.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 22.0Gợi ý: 回答混乱且词不达意,发音或用词错误影响理解。根据评分规则需要先直接回应,再用连词补充具体理由、例子或对比。建议用清晰的句子表达:说明是否流行,指出具体人群和使用场景,并给出原因(例如经济、环保或交通便利)。使用简单准确的词汇并保持逻辑连贯,句子总数不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. Many young people and commuters ride bikes because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, in cities you can often see people cycling to work or to school, and the government has built bike lanes to make cycling safer.
× Yes, it's purring, it's popular monster young people and free to bike Harry oh everyday work.
✓ Yes, it’s popular among young people, and many use bikes to commute to work every day.
句子结构混乱且多处用词错误:原句包含无意义词(purring、monster、Harry oh)并且缺少连贯的语法结构。应把意思整理为两部分:1) 表示“在年轻人中受欢迎”用短语 popular among young people;2) 表示“很多人每天骑车上下班”用短语 use bikes to commute to work every day。建议写句子时先理清要表达的要点,按主语+谓语+宾语的顺序组织,避免堆砌无关词。