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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, it's popular in my country. Like so many people using bikes, like in my place, so many people using that to going to work and like exercising, going to MOA like that.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Be careful with tense and provide a complete, slightly expanded response. Use past tense for childhood and add one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief detail about the bike or how you used it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was six, and I used it to ride around the neighborhood with my friends every afternoon.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a topic sentence and specific supporting details, use correct grammar and linking words (for example, 'because', 'for', 'also'). Avoid repeating filler words like 'like'. Be specific about who uses bikes and for what purposes. Keep the response natural and within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to work because they are cheap and can beat traffic, and others ride for exercise or leisure on weekends. For example, in my neighborhood many people cycle to the market every morning.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have.

Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is a present-tense auxiliary; 'did' correctly matches the past question. Use past simple for short answers about past possession: 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: Answer past questions with past simple (did/had) as appropriate.

Third person singular issue

× Yes, it's popular in my country.

Yes, they're popular in my country.

The student refers to 'bikes' (plural). Using 'it's' (it is) is third-person singular and does not agree with the plural subject. Use 'they're' (they are) to agree with the plural noun. Suggestion: Match subject number with the correct verb form (singular it is vs plural they are).

Sentence structure errors

× Like so many people using bikes, like in my place, so many people using that to going to work and like exercising, going to MOA like that.

For example, many people in my area use bikes to go to work, to exercise, and to go to the mall.

The original sentence has multiple structure problems: missing finite verbs, incorrect verb forms ('using' instead of 'use', 'to going' instead of 'to go'), unnecessary filler 'like', and unclear phrase 'MOA'. Correction provides clear subject-verb structure, parallel verb forms, and clearer vocabulary ('mall' if MOA means mall). Specific suggestions: remove filler words such as 'like', use simple present 'use' when describing general facts, keep parallel structure for lists (use 'to go', 'to exercise'), and avoid nonstandard abbreviations unless defined.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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