Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a child I have a bike and not only one, I have many bikes because I always use my bike to go to school and in the weekend I ride my bike to the park to see the beautiful view.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think definitely yes uh, my country is China and in China there are a lot of sharing bikes. People always ride bike to go to work or from home and to the park, uh, to get some relax.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要注意时态、语法和句子连贯性,避免重复并用连接词使表达更自然。可以用过去时描述过去拥有的情况,用少量句子清晰交代细节,并补充具体例子(如几辆、骑行目的、频率)。例如:先一句主题句(I had bicycles as a child),接着用一两句用because、so、for example等连接词补充细节。
Ví dụ: I had a bicycle when I was a child. In fact, I owned several bikes because I used them to get to school every day. On weekends I often rode to the park to enjoy the scenery and relax.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答应更有条理并减少口头填充词(如 uh)。先给出直接回答(Yes, they are popular),然后用具体原因和例子支持(如共享单车的普及、通勤和休闲用途、城市与乡村差异等),并使用连接词(for example, therefore, because)增强逻辑。注意语法(ride a bike, get some rest/relaxation)。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in China. For example, the widespread availability of bike-sharing services makes cycling a convenient option for commuting. Many people also use bikes to get to parks or run short errands, which helps reduce traffic and is environmentally friendly.
× Yes, when I was a child I have a bike and not only one, I have many bikes because I always use my bike to go to school and in the weekend I ride my bike to the park to see the beautiful view.
✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a bike, and not only one — I had many bikes because I always used my bike to go to school, and on weekends I rode my bike to the park to see the beautiful views.
问题类型:现在时使用不当(与过去时间状语冲突)。说明:句子开头有过去时间状语“when I was a child”,但原句中使用了现在时态动词(have, use, ride),时态应统一为过去时。建议:将动词改为过去式(have→had;use→used;ride→rode),并把“in the weekend”改为正确短语“on weekends/at the weekend”;另外增加适当的标点分隔长句,使表达更清晰。
× I think definitely yes uh, my country is China and in China there are a lot of sharing bikes.
✓ I definitely think so. My country is China, and in China there are a lot of shared bikes.
问题类型:现在时使用与表达自然性问题(时态本身不错误,但表达不自然且词汇搭配不当)。说明:原句口语填充词较多且语序可优化;短语“sharing bikes”在此处应使用“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing bikes”。建议:把回答分成两句以更自然流畅,去掉“uh”,将“sharing bikes”改成“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing bicycles”。
× People always ride bike to go to work or from home and to the park, uh, to get some relax.
✓ People always ride bikes to go to work, from home, or to the park to relax.
问题类型:动词/名词搭配及词形使用不当。说明:"ride bike"缺少复数或冠词,应为"ride bikes"或"ride a bike";“to get some relax”是不正确的搭配,正确表达为"to relax"或"to get some relaxation"。另外并列结构中标点与连接词需调整使句子更清晰。建议:将"ride bike"改为"ride bikes"(泛指),把"to get some relax"改为"to relax",并整理并列短语的顺序和标点。