Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a big one and I'm a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's very popular in our country and many people, uh, I uh, go to work by bike because it's convenient and good for health.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接对应问题并用正确时态与完整句子。你应说明过去是否拥有自行车、描述自行车并可补充一两句关于何时或如何使用的细节。避免时态和语法错误,句子不超过五句。建议使用连接词如“and”或“because”来丰富回答。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a big red bicycle when I was a child, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every weekend. It had a basket on the front and was very sturdy, so I felt confident riding it on busy streets.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容基本相关但口语中有过多犹豫词和小错误,注意主谓一致和流利度。可以给出更具体的细节或例子,比如在城市哪些人群骑车、骑车的比例或骑行的优点与缺点。使用连接词(for example, because, therefore)使表达更连贯,保持句子在五句以内。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many office workers and students commute by bike because it is cheap and avoids traffic. In addition, cycling is considered healthy, so more people choose it for short trips around the city.
× Yes, I have a big one and I'm a child.
✓ Yes, I had a big one when I was a child.
问题类型:现在时使用不当(与背景时间不一致)。学生在回答“Did you have... when you were a child?”(过去时)时却用了现在时“I have”和现在进行“I'm a child”,与提问的过去时间不一致。应该使用过去时态描述过去拥有的事物,并且不应再次说“I'm a child”(现在我是孩子)而应说“when I was a child”(当我是孩子时)。建议:在描述过去的情况时把动词换成过去时(have → had),并使用正确的时间状语(when I was a child)。
× Yes, it's very popular in our country and many people, uh, I uh, go to work by bike because it's convenient and good for health.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country, and many people go to work by bike because it's convenient and good for their health.
问题类型:主谓一致和句子结构错误。原句中使用“it's very popular”指代不明确(应指“bikes”复数),主语和谓语单复数不一致;且原句有多余的主语“I”导致句子重复(“many people, ... I ... go”)。另外“good for health”缺少所有格,习惯表达为“good for their health”。建议:把指代改为复数形式“bikes are”,删除多余的“I”,并在“health”前加所有格(their)。