Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, fluency and coherence. Give a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh) and incorrect verb forms, and use linking words to connect ideas. Be specific about frequency and activities. Keep answer within 2–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child; my mother gave it to me as a birthday present when I was in third grade. I used it to go to tuition classes during the week and to ride with my friends every Saturday, which helped me stay active and make friends.

Gợi ý: Work on pronunciation (e.g., 'bikes'), sentence structure and accuracy (singular/plural and articles). Start with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Correct vocabulary mistakes (car, commute) and avoid short fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and practical. For example, many families cannot afford cars due to the high cost, so people use bicycles or motorbikes to commute to work and run errands every day.

× Yes, I usually have a bicycle.

✓ Yes, I usually had a bicycle.

The context is past (when you were a child), so the verb should be in the past tense. Use 'had' instead of 'have' to match the time frame of the question. Suggestion: Pay attention to time markers (e.g., 'when I was a child') and use past-tense verbs accordingly.

× When I was a kid, my mother gifted me uh, when I was in class 3 as a birthday gift.

✓ When I was a kid in class 3, my mother gifted me a bicycle as a birthday present.

The original sentence repeats time phrases and lacks the object 'a bicycle', causing awkward structure. Rearranging the time phrase before the main clause and adding the object makes the sentence clear. Suggestion: Place time expressions at the start or end, avoid repetition, and include the object of 'gifted'.

× Uh, I always used to wrote it when I had to go for tuition and uh, every Saturday, uh, with my friends.

✓ I used to always write it when I had to go to tuition and every Saturday I went with my friends.

After 'used to' the base form of the verb is required, so 'write' not 'wrote'. Also 'go for tuition' is better expressed as 'go to tuition' and the sentence needed clearer sequencing for Saturday trips. Suggestion: Use 'used to' + base verb for habitual past actions and use 'go to' for places like tuition.

× So I go for a bicycle ride.

✓ So I went for bicycle rides.

The context is past habitual action, so use past tense 'went' and plural 'rides' for regular activities. Suggestion: Match verb tense and pluralization to indicate habitual past actions.

× These bites are more popular in my country and I think it is very affordable for every household.

✓ Bicycles are very popular in my country, and I think they are affordable for most households.

'These bites' is a mispronunciation/wrong word; use 'bicycles'. Also 'it' should be 'they' to agree with plural subject, and 'most households' is more natural than 'every household'. Suggestion: Ensure subject noun is correct and pronouns agree in number with the subject.

× Due to economy.

✓ Due to the economy, cars are expensive.

This fragment is incomplete and unclear. It needs an article 'the' before 'economy' and should connect to a full clause explaining the effect. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; combine with a following clause to express cause and effect.

× The car are very expensive in my country so everybody are not able to buy that.

✓ Cars are very expensive in my country, so not everyone is able to buy one.

Subject-verb agreement: 'car' (singular) with 'are' is incorrect; use plural 'cars' with 'are' or singular 'car is'. Also 'everybody' is singular and needs 'is', and 'not everyone' is more natural. Replace 'that' with 'one' or 'a car'. Suggestion: Ensure subjects and verbs agree in number and use natural quantifiers like 'not everyone'.

× So for their daily use people have card they used to go for office and other works.

✓ So for daily use, people have cars; they use them to go to the office and for other work.

Multiple issues: 'card' is a typo for 'cars'. Verb forms and prepositions are incorrect: 'used to go for office' should be 'use them to go to the office'. 'Other works' should be 'other work'. The corrected sentence clarifies possession and purpose. Suggestion: Watch for typos, ensure correct prepositions ('to the office'), and use uncountable 'work' for general activities.