Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, I think the buys, MMM, it's not popular in my country.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答只是复述了考官的问题,未给出任何信息。按照评分标准,应直接回答问题并补充1–2句具体细节。说话要自然、简明,并使用连接词使表达连贯。练习时可说明是否有自行车、何时使用、与谁一起骑或骑车的频率等细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood with my friends. It helped me become more independent and I have fond memories of those afternoons.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点但发音不清、组织混乱且缺少具体支持。应给出明确的主题句,然后用1–2个具体理由或例子来支持观点,使用连接词如“because”、“for example”提升连贯性。同时注意发音(bike, not buys)和避免停顿填词("MMM")。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because the infrastructure is poor and most people prefer cars for convenience. For example, few cities have dedicated bike lanes, so many people feel it's unsafe to cycle on busy roads.
× No, I think the buys, MMM, it's not popular in my country.
✓ No, I think bikes, MMM, they're not popular in my country.
错误类型接近于词语使用和主谓一致问题(这里原句把“bikes”说成“buys”是拼写/发音错误),以及代词和动词形式需要与复数主语一致。建议: 1) 将“buys”改为正确单词“bikes”(注意发音和拼写),这是语义错误。 2) 因为“bikes”是复数,用复数代词或复数动词:可以说“they're not popular”或“bikes are not popular”。 3) 口语中填充词“MMM”可以保留但不影响语法。示例改正句:"No, I think bikes, MMM, they're not popular in my country." 或更正式:"No, I think bicycles are not popular in my country."