Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear with a well-structured sentence, avoid grammatical errors and unnecessary words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, correct verb forms (used to) and simpler phrasing improve clarity. Also keep it within 1–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. For example, I used to ride it to school and around my neighborhood every day, which helped me become confident on the road.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly, then give clear, specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Use past/present contrasts properly (e.g., “used to be popular” for the past). Avoid fillers like “umm” and unclear fragments. Mention concrete examples and time references to make your point convincing.

Ví dụ: Not really; bikes are less popular now than they were before. In the past, people used to ride bicycles to commute short distances and meet friends in the neighborhood, but nowadays most people prefer motorbikes or cars because they are faster and more convenient.

× Yup, in the part I used to have a bike and even I already know how to ride it.

✓ Yup, in the past I used to have a bike and I already knew how to ride it.

The sentence has incorrect time word and tense/pronoun use. 'in the part' is incorrect; it should be 'in the past' (word choice). 'used to have' is correct for a past habit, but mixing 'used to have' with 'I already know' creates a tense inconsistency. Since the question asks about childhood (past), use past tense 'knew' not present 'know'. Also remove the extra pronoun placement 'even I' which is unnatural; use 'and I'. Suggestion: use consistent past references for past habits and abilities.'

× Umm not really, but in the past it's used to be popular in my country.

✓ Umm, not really, but in the past bikes used to be popular in my country.

The structure 'it's used to be' is incorrect. 'There be' type includes existence and be-verb constructions; here the correct idiom is 'used to be' to indicate a past state. Also include the subject 'bikes' so the sentence is clear. Use 'used to be popular' for past habitual states.'

× In the past they use I to go around city or hang out with other people in the RE in the neighborhood.

✓ In the past, people used them to get around the city or to hang out with others in the neighborhood.

This sentence has multiple structure and word-choice errors. 'they use I' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'people used them' (referring to bikes). 'go around city' needs the article 'the city'. 'hang out with other people in the RE in the neighborhood' is unclear; 'in the RE' is not meaningful. Rephrase to 'hang out with others in the neighborhood.' Use past tense 'used' to match 'in the past.' Ensure pronoun reference is clear (them = bikes).'