Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. There are many, many people ride a bike on the street.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺少细节与扩展。建议在主题句后补充原因或回忆性的细节,使用连接词(例如because, so, but)使句子更连贯,并保持不超过5句。例如说明为什么没有、自行车是否常见、是否借过或什么时候第一次骑车。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike on weekends, which is how I learned to ride. Looking back, those rides were my favorite pastime when the weather was nice.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确但句子结构有语法问题且缺少具体细节。建议使用更地道的表达和连接词(for example, because, especially),给出具体例子或原因(如通勤、环保、城市基础设施),并修正语法错误(people ride → people riding 或 people who ride)。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short commutes. For example, many people ride bikes to work or school, especially in crowded cities where traffic is heavy. In addition, bike-sharing programs have made cycling even more common.
× There are many, many people ride a bike on the street.
✓ Many people ride bikes on the street.
该句的问题是动词使用与句子结构不正确。原句使用了“There are many, many people ride a bike...”,这是把存在句(There are ...)与陈述句主谓结构混合,导致语法不通。正确表达有两种常见方式:1) 使用存在句并用分词或从句修饰:There are many people who ride bikes on the street. 2) 直接用一般陈述句:Many people ride bikes on the street。另:bike 在泛指复数骑行者时应使用复数形式 bikes,或在单数人称前用 a bike,如 “people ride a bike” 听起来不自然。建议:学习并区分存在句(There is/are + 主语)和一般陈述句(主语 + 谓语),以及名词单复数的一致性。