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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me and I used to ride it around the neighborhood with my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country because traffic is often congested so people prefer them for commuting. They are cheaper and easier to park them cars.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear, natural and directly answers the question with a topic sentence and supporting detail. To improve further, make the response slightly more concise and add a linking word to connect ideas smoothly; also include one specific memory or reason to make it more vivid. Keep it within five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me. I rode it around the neighborhood with my friends every afternoon, and I remember practicing turns on the corner near my house. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I learned to ride confidently within a week.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but there are a few errors and awkward phrasing. Improve grammar (e.g., 'easier to park than cars'), use a linking word to structure the reasons, and add a specific example or statistic to support your point. Also clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes at the start to avoid confusion.

Ví dụ: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country. Mainly because traffic is often congested, people prefer motorbikes for commuting as they are cheaper and, moreover, easier to park than cars; for example, many office workers use them to save time during rush hour.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× They are cheaper and easier to park them cars.

They are cheaper and easier to park than cars.

The original sentence incorrectly includes the pronoun 'them' after 'park', causing redundancy and ungrammatical structure. The intended comparison requires 'than' to compare motorbikes with cars. Use 'easier to park than cars' or 'easier to park than cars are.' Also ensure parallel structure: 'cheaper and easier to park than cars.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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