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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I live in Japan, so yeah, I think it's really popular in Japan.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Expand slightly beyond a one-word confirmation. Give a topic sentence that answers directly, then add one or two specific details (e.g., what kind of bike, how often you used it, a memory) using a linking word to make the response natural and coherent. Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it to the park nearly every afternoon. Because I practised a lot, I learned to ride without the training wheels by the time I was seven.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating the country name and give a clear reason or example to support your opinion. Start with a direct topic sentence and then add a supporting detail with a linking word (for example, because, for instance). Use specific evidence such as common uses, infrastructure, or cultural habits to make the answer more convincing and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in Japan because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, cities have many bike lanes and parking areas, so students and office workers often cycle to school or the station.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I live in Japan, so yeah, I think it's really popular in Japan.

I live in Japan, so yeah, I think bikes are really popular here.

The original sentence uses the pronoun 'it' to refer to 'bikes,' which is plural; this is an incorrect use of pronouns (singular 'it' for a plural noun). Replace 'it' with 'they' or rephrase to avoid ambiguity. Also repeating 'in Japan' is redundant after stating 'I live in Japan'; use 'here' for naturalness. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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