Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and accurate. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question (past tense). Use correct verbs and simple nouns, limit to 3–4 sentences, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words (for example, 'and' or 'so') to make it coherent. Avoid unclear words (e.g., 'buy' and 'Charles').

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I got my first bike when I was seven years old, and my father bought it for me from a local shop. We practiced riding together in the neighborhood, so I learned to balance quickly.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use accurate vocabulary. Begin with a clear statement (e.g., 'Yes, I think bikes are popular'), then give 1–2 specific reasons using correct nouns and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' and avoid vague or incorrect words ('Spike', 'the Bangkok').

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles and motorbikes are very popular in my country because traffic congestion is common in cities like Bangkok. For example, many people choose motorbikes since they can weave through small gaps and arrive at work on time.

× Yes, I have a buy when I was Charles.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was child.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns/words: 'have' (present) should be past 'had' to match 'when I was...', 'buy' is wrong word for 'bike', and 'Charles' is incorrect noun here — likely meant 'a child'. Use 'had' for past possession and 'child' as the correct noun. Suggestion: use 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× I have the first buy when I was seven years old.

✓ I got my first bike when I was seven years old.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with a past time expression. Use past tense 'got' to match 'when I was seven years old'. Also 'buy' is the wrong noun; use 'bike'. Suggestion: 'I got my first bike when I was seven years old.'

× My dad brought it from the shop to me, so we practice together.

✓ My dad bought it for me from the shop, so we practiced together.

Use 'bought' (past) instead of 'brought' in this context and 'for me' is the correct preposition phrase; 'from the shop' is fine but order changed for natural English. Also 'practice' should be past 'practiced' to match past timeframe. Suggestion: 'My dad bought it for me from the shop, so we practiced together.'

× In my opinions, I think Spike is very popular in my country because of the traffic jam in the Bangkok.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because of traffic jams in Bangkok.

Use singular phrase 'In my opinion' not 'opinions'. 'Spike' is incorrect—should be 'bikes'. 'The Bangkok' is incorrect; city names don't take 'the'. 'traffic jam' should be plural 'traffic jams' to refer generally. Also match plural 'bikes' with 'are'. Suggestion: 'In my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because of traffic jams in Bangkok.'

× They popular use the small vehicle that can pass to the gap between the car or the building.

✓ People often use small vehicles that can pass through gaps between cars or buildings.

'They popular use' is ungrammatical. Use 'People often use' or 'They often use'. 'the small vehicle' should be plural 'small vehicles'. Use 'pass through gaps' not 'pass to the gap'. Use plural 'cars or buildings' for generalization. Suggestion: 'People often use small vehicles that can pass through gaps between cars or buildings.'

× It is very important to be on time.

✓ It is very important to be on time.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It properly uses the infinitive 'to be' to express importance. No change needed.