Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike in my childhood.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are so many shared bike in our city.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 句子语法不准确且回答过于简短、缺乏细节。建议用正确的时态和更自然的表达开头,并补充一到两句具体细节(如什么时候得到的、骑车的回忆或频率)。同时控制在最多5句内,使用连接词使叙述流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it almost every afternoon. I remember learning to balance with my father’s help, and we often cycled to the nearby park on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 句子有语法和单复数错误,回答也过于简短且缺乏具体细节。建议使用正确的主谓一致和名词复数形式,并补充原因或例子(如共享单车的普及原因、使用场景或对交通的影响),用连接词使逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think they are very popular. In my city there are many shared bikes available, which people use for short trips to work or shops. Because they are cheap and convenient, especially during rush hour, many residents prefer them over cars.
× Yes, I have a bike in my childhood.
✓ Yes, I had a bike in my childhood.
语法问题类型 ID:6(现在时问题)。原句使用了现在时动词“have”,但句子时间状语“in my childhood”表示过去,时态不一致。应使用过去时“had”。建议:遇到表示过去的时间词(如 childhood, when I was a child, last year 等)时,把动词改为过去式。
× Yes, there are so many shared bike in our city.
✓ Yes, there are so many shared bikes in our city.
语法问题类型 ID:1(单复数问题)。原句中名词“bike”在“so many”之后应使用复数形式,且主语与复数名词不一致。应改为“bikes”。建议:与表示大量的词(many, a lot of, several 等)连用时,名词要用复数形式。