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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 你在回答时直接重复考官的问题了,导致无法得到评分。改进要点:1) 直接以肯定或否定的主题句开头(例如:Yes, I did. / No, I didn't.)。2) 提供1-2个具体细节来支持答案(比如你有哪种自行车,什么时候用它,和谁一起骑)。3) 使用连接词如“because”或“so”让句子更连贯。4) 控制在最多5句内,避免重复考官的话。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends. Because the roads near our house were quiet, I felt safe practicing new tricks and building my confidence on wheels.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你只是重复了考官的问题,没有给出任何观点或细节。改进要点:1) 先给出明确立场(例如:Yes, they are popular. / Not very popular.)。2) 提供具体原因或举例(如城市交通、环保意识、共享单车的影响)。3) 使用连接词如“because”、“for example”来组织思路。4) 保持简洁,最多5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. For example, shared-bike schemes have made cycling more convenient, and many people choose bikes for short trips because they are cheap and eco-friendly.

Ngữ pháp

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× Did you have a bike when you were child?

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

错误类型:There be/名词短语缺限定词。句中“child”是可数名词,表示“一个孩子/孩童时期”时需使用不定冠词“a”或其他限定词。原句缺少冠词导致不符合英语习惯。改正建议:在可数单数名词前加上适当的冠词或限定词,例如“a child”或用复数/代词根据语境调整。

Sentence structure errors

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

该句无语法错误。句子结构正确,时态与询问意图匹配,动词、主语和补语使用恰当。无需修改。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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