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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, absolutely. I think almost every children has a bike when we watch out. Umm.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in our country most people like biking in their leisure, leisure time.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接且语法准确。避免无意义填充词(如 "Umm"),并控制长度在不超过五句话。开头用一句清晰的主题句(例如:"Yes, I did."),然后用一两句具体细节支持(比如什么时候得到、谁送的、你常去哪里骑)。注意主谓一致(children → children are/children have)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven from my parents as a birthday present, and I rode it every afternoon around the neighborhood park. Riding with my friends helped me become more confident and active.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更自然并包含具体原因或例子,避免重复词(如重复“leisure”)。先给出明确观点,然后用1–2个具体原因或例子支持,使用连接词(for example, because, so)使逻辑更连贯。可提到场所(公园、城市)或人群(学生、上班族)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular here because many people use them for leisure and short trips. For example, students often cycle to campus and families ride bikes together in parks on weekends.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I think almost every children has a bike when we watch out.

I think almost every child had a bike when we were growing up.

问题类型:复数与单数混用。句中使用了 every,应接单数名词,因此 every children 应改为 every child;另外时态和表达也不自然:原句问的是过去是否有自行车,且带有“当我们长大/小时候”意思,建议用过去时 had 和短语 were growing up(或 when we were children)。同时主语与动词时态要一致,has(现在时)需改为 had(过去时)。建议用法:every + 单数名词;注意时态与时间状语一致。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I think almost every children has a bike when we watch out.

I think almost every child had a bike when we were growing up.

问题类型:主谓一致错误。原句 every children(every 后应接单数 child)与谓语 has/ had 要一致;在过去语境下,谓语应为 had。将 children 改为 child,并把 has 改为过去时 had,可以确保主谓一致。

Present tense issue

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in our country most people like biking in their leisure, leisure time.

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most people like cycling in their leisure time.

问题类型:现在时使用问题和习惯表达。原句中重复使用 in our country 和 leisure, leisure time 冗余;并且常用搭配是 like cycling 或 like to cycle,且 leisure time 前不需要加介词 in(也可说 in their free time)。此外,biking 虽可用但 cycling 更常见于正式表达。保持现在时时态无误,但建议简化为:most people like cycling in their leisure time。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in our country most people like biking in their leisure, leisure time.

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most people like cycling in their leisure time.

问题类型:介词使用不当与冗余。原句先说 in my country 又说 in our country,造成重复;此外 'like biking in their leisure' 中的 in 可以保留但更常见的说法是 'in their leisure time' 或 'in their free time'。建议去掉多余的短语并使用固定搭配 'leisure time'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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