Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and keep focus on the question. Begin with a clear topic sentence (“No, I didn’t have a bike.”), then add one or two specific supporting details (reason and a brief consequence). Avoid introducing unrelated information (buying a car) unless you link it clearly to bikes. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. As a result, I often walked to school and sometimes borrowed neighbors’ bikes on weekends. Now that I earn money, I save for things I need, but I still remember how much I wanted a bike then.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and then give specific, varied supporting details and a linking word for coherence. Avoid repetition (e.g., “depend more on bikes” repeated). Add an example or brief comparison to strengthen your answer and use precise vocabulary (e.g., “commuters,” “cost-effective”). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among commuters. Many people use them to travel to work or college because they are cost-effective and easy to park. For example, students and low-income workers often choose motorcycles or bicycles instead of cars to save on fuel and parking expenses.

× Actually no, I didn't own a bike when I was a child as my family was less well off and they couldn't afford to buy one.

✓ Actually no, I didn't own a bike when I was a child because my family was less well off and couldn't afford to buy one.

Use 'because' instead of 'as' to clearly state reason in spoken English; remove redundant subject 'they' before 'couldn't' because the subject 'my family' has already been established. Maintain past tense 'didn't own' and 'couldn't afford' to match the time frame.

× But since now I've started earning I did buy myself a car and I use it daily for transportation.

✓ But now that I've started earning, I bought myself a car and I use it daily for transportation.

Sequence of tenses: 'since now I've started earning' is awkward; use 'now that I've started earning' to introduce a present result of a recent change. Use simple past 'bought' (or present perfect 'have bought') rather than 'did buy' for natural speech. Comma after the introductory clause improves clarity.

× It made me so happy.

✓ It made me very happy.

Verb tense 'made' (past) is acceptable because the buying is a completed action; change 'so' to 'very' for more formal register, though 'so' is not strictly incorrect. This clarification refines style; if speaker wants present effect, use 'It makes me very happy.'

× The most part of the community in which I live depends on the bike to travel to their work, to their offices, to their colleges.

✓ Most people in my community depend on bicycles to travel to work, to the office, or to college.

'The most part of the community' is unidiomatic; use 'most people in my community'. 'Depends on the bike' should be 'depend on bicycles' for plural/uncountable use. Use parallel, concise phrases: 'to travel to work, to the office, or to college.' Adjust pronouns and articles accordingly.

× And bikes are more economical than buying a car.

✓ And bikes are more economical than buying a car.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable; no article error. Provided for completeness: alternatively 'than buying a car' is fine or 'than owning a car.' No change required.

× So yeah, people depend more on bikes, and they are more popular in my country.

✓ So yeah, people depend more on bikes, and bikes are more popular in my country.

Original 'they' could refer to 'people' causing ambiguity. Replacing 'they' with 'bikes' clarifies the subject: bikes are more popular. Subject-verb agreement remains correct but clarity is improved.