Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 내용적으로는 기억을 잘 말하려 했으나 문법과 문장구성이 많이 어색합니다. 우선 간단하고 명확한 주제문(예: “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”)을 말한 뒤, 과거 빈도나 함께 타던 사람, 실력 수준 같은 구체적 세부사항을 연결어(When I was young, Usually, However 등)로 자연스럽게 이어보세요. 문법 오류(현재형/과거형 혼용, 수동태 오용)와 단어 선택(‘younger father’→‘my younger brother’ 등)을 교정하고, 문장은 최대 5문장 이내로 유지하세요. 연습 방법: 각 아이디어를 한 문장씩 만들고 linking words로 연결해 자연스럽게 말하기 연습을 하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it quite often, usually with my younger brother, who was much better at cycling than I was. At first I learned to use a four-wheeled training bike, so it took me a while to feel confident on a regular two-wheeler. Because I wasn’t very good at balancing, my brother often helped me practice until I could ride on my own.

Gợi ý: 내용을 전하려는 의도는 있지만 표현이 모호하고 문장 구성과 어휘 선택이 많이 부정확합니다. 먼저 명확한 주제문(예: “Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.”)을 말하고, 이어서 이유(환경, 편의성, 제도 등)를 구체적으로 제시하세요. 논리적 연결을 위해 because, for example, also 같은 연결어를 사용하고, 중복 표현을 줄이세요. ‘system of the land by cool with coldness’ 같은 모호한 표현은 구체적으로 바꿔야 합니다(예: good cycling infrastructure, flat terrain, affordable transportation).

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many cities have dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing programs, which makes cycling convenient for daily travel. Also, because some areas are fairly flat, people often choose bikes instead of cars for short distances. As a result, bicycles are a common and affordable way to get around for many residents.

× Oh, it's not very often, but I'm usually go with my bike.

✓ Oh, not very often, but I usually go by bike.

The verb phrase 'I'm usually go' mixes present continuous 'am' with a simple present verb 'go'. Use simple present 'I usually go' for habitual actions; use 'go by bike' instead of 'go with my bike' for natural English.

× I usually go with my younger father and he is he's really good at biking, but I'm not good at it.

✓ I usually go with my younger brother and he is really good at biking, but I'm not good at it.

The word 'younger father' is incorrect; likely intended 'younger brother' or 'my father' (no 'younger'). Also remove duplicated 'he is he's'. Ensure one correct subject reference and a single verb form.

× So I'm practiced by the four bike, 4 wheels bike and I'm not good at still no biking by.

✓ So I practiced on a four-wheeled bike and I'm still not good at biking.

'I'm practiced by' is wrong passive use; use active past 'I practiced on'. 'Four bike, 4 wheels bike' should be 'four-wheeled bike' (adjective form). 'I'm not good at still no biking by' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I'm still not good at biking.'

× Yes, I think so 'cause we are in our country, we have the system of the land by cool with coldness.

✓ Yes, I think so because in our country we have a system of land transportation that is suitable for the cold climate.

The original mixes awkward phrases and incorrect noun usage. 'We are in our country' is unnecessary; use 'in our country'. 'The system of the land by cool with coldness' is unclear; clarify as 'a system of land transportation suitable for the cold climate.' Use simple present for general truths.

× I have experienced that.

✓ I have experienced that.

This sentence is grammatically correct but vague; keep as is or expand for clarity (e.g., 'I have experienced that myself').

× I have the experience of using it.

✓ I have experience using it.

Use the uncountable noun 'experience' without 'the' for general experience. 'Of using it' is wordy; prefer the gerund 'using it'.

× I think that this really convenience and really good at for people who have to who have who have to buy.

✓ I think that this is really convenient and very good for people who need to buy one.

'This really convenience' uses noun instead of adjective; use 'convenient'. Add 'is' to form a complete clause. 'Good at for people' is incorrect collocation; use 'good for people'. Remove repeated 'who have to' and clarify 'need to buy one.'