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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but my grandpa used to have one and me and my cousin usually go out on his bicycles and we had a really good time back in the childhood.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think actually the shared bikes are usually very common and popular in China, things that we have many spots for borrow, for borrowing and returning shared bicycles in China just in front of the exit of subways or just in the entrance and exit of our community. So it's very.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 句子较长且有语法错误(时态和人称),表述有些重复和不够简洁。建议:1) 开头先直接回答(简短主题句),2) 用正确的时态和代词,3) 用一到两句具体细节支持,避免冗长。示例改进点:将“I didn't have a bike”作为主题句,接着说明借骑自行车的情况和一次具体回忆,用连词保持衔接。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child. However, my grandfather owned one, so my cousin and I often borrowed it to ride around our neighborhood on weekends. We especially enjoyed riding to the nearby park and racing each other, which made those summers very memorable.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答逻辑混乱且有重复词(borrow/borrowing)与不完整句尾。建议:1) 先给出直接回答,2) 用一到两句具体事实或例子支持(如共享单车站点位置、便利性或使用场景),3) 使用连接词使语句连贯,避免句子过长。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially shared bikes. For example, you can find docking stations near subway exits and community entrances, which makes short trips and last-mile travel very convenient for commuters.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but my grandpa used to have one and me and my cousin usually go out on his bicycles and we had a really good time back in the childhood.

I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but my grandpa used to have one, and my cousin and I usually went out on his bicycle and we had a really good time in childhood.

问题类型:过去时错误(5)。原句中混用了过去时和现在时:主句用过去时(didn't have, used to),但子句中 'me and my cousin usually go out' 使用了一般现在时,应改为过去时 'usually went out' 与主句时态一致。另外,'me and my cousin' 是不正确的主格顺序,应为 'my cousin and I';‘his bicycles’ 若指一辆车应为单数 'his bicycle';'back in the childhood' 用法不自然,改为简单的 'in childhood' 或 'when I was a child'。建议:在叙述过去发生且已结束的动作时,整个句子保持过去时;主语用主格顺序 'X and I';名词单复数要根据实际数量选择。

Present tense issue

× Yes, I think actually the shared bikes are usually very common and popular in China, things that we have many spots for borrow, for borrowing and returning shared bicycles in China just in front of the exit of subways or just in the entrance and exit of our community. So it's very.

Yes, I think shared bikes are very common and popular in China. We have many spots for borrowing and returning shared bicycles, for example in front of subway exits or at the entrances and exits of our communities.

问题类型:现在时错误(6)及句子结构问题(26,已只按允许类型修正为现在时)。原句冗长且结构混乱,使用了重复或不准确的短语('for borrow, for borrowing'),动词短语应为 'for borrowing and returning';'in front of the exit of subways' 表达不自然,改为 'in front of subway exits';'the entrance and exit of our community' 改为复数 'entrances and exits of our communities' 以泛指多个社区。此外句末 'So it's very.' 不完整,已删除并将信息分成两句以确保时态一致和表达完整。建议:使用一致的现在时表述普遍事实,避免重复,保持句子完整且结构清晰。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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