Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, sentence structure and fluency. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and pronouns, avoid filler words (um, you know), and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep it natural and concise (max 3–4 short sentences).

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t interested in cycling. Instead, I preferred quieter activities; for example, I spent a lot of time drawing and painting. As a result, my hobbies developed in a more artistic direction.

Gợi ý: Work on accuracy, coherence and vocabulary. Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer expressions (e.g., “motorbikes” or “bicycles”), avoid repetition, and use linking words to organize reasons. Provide specific reasons and brief examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people, especially men, buy motorbikes because they are affordable and convenient for commuting. For example, workers often use motorbikes to get to markets and factories quickly, especially in crowded cities.

× No, I had no bike when I were I was a child because I was not fond of, you know, riding bikes or bicycle.

✓ No, I had no bike when I was a child because I was not fond of riding bikes or bicycles.

The sentence contains an incorrect past-tense verb form 'were' for the first person singular; it should be 'was'. Also 'bicycle' should be plural or matched with 'riding bikes' for consistency. Suggestion: use 'I was' for past tense and keep noun number consistent: 'riding bikes' or 'riding a bicycle.'

× I love, I love to do something, umm, very productive like drawings and.

✓ I love doing something very productive, like drawing.

The speaker mixes present simple 'I love' with an incomplete phrase 'and.' Use a gerund after 'love' when describing activities: 'I love doing.' Also 'drawings' as a general activity is better as the gerund 'drawing.' Remove filler and complete the thought. Suggestion: 'I love doing something very productive, like drawing.'

× Yeah, it is very, very popular in our country and people, some people bought it because of their work.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very, very popular in our country and some people buy them because of their work.

The original mixes present general statement with past tense 'bought.' Use present simple 'are' and 'buy' for habitual/general truths. Also 'it' should be plural 'them' to agree with 'bikes.' Suggestion: use consistent present tense and plural pronouns.

× People of our country like male, male bike.

✓ People in our country, especially men, like motorcycles/bikes.

The phrase 'like male, male bike' is ungrammatical. Use 'men' to refer to male people and specify 'motorcycles' or 'bikes.' Also 'People of our country' is better as 'People in our country.' Suggestion: 'People in our country, especially men, like bikes.'

× A male bought bike a lot.

✓ Men buy bikes a lot.

The sentence uses singular 'a male' with uncountable structure 'bought bike a lot.' For general habits, use plural 'men' and present simple 'buy' rather than past 'bought.' Also plural 'bikes' is required. Suggestion: 'Men buy bikes a lot.'

× They ride it because it is very easy to go in anywhere.

✓ They ride them because it is very easy to go anywhere by bike.

Preposition 'in' is incorrect in 'go in anywhere.' Use 'go anywhere' and add 'by bike' to show mode of transport. Pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to match plural 'bikes.' Suggestion: 'They ride them because it is very easy to go anywhere by bike.'