Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Expand slightly: give a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use a linking phrase if you add information, keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Also avoid one-word answers when possible.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to the park every weekend. Because the neighborhood was quiet and safe, I learned to ride quickly and often practiced with my friends.

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and specific: start with a clear opinion, then give one or two concrete reasons using linking words (for example, “because” or “for instance”). Replace fillers like “umm” and simplify awkward phrasing (e.g., “well developed about borrowing bikes”). Keep it within five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in South Korea because many cities have public bike-sharing systems and dedicated bike lanes. For example, Seoul and Busan offer rental bikes at subway stations, which makes short trips more convenient and eco-friendly.

× Yes, I think so because umm, my home country South Korea is really well developed about borrowing bikes or something else to transport from one to another.

✓ Yes, I think so because my home country, South Korea, has a well-developed bike-sharing system and other transport options for traveling from one place to another.

The original sentence uses incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing ('well developed about borrowing bikes', 'from one to another'). Use 'well-developed' as an adjective describing a system, and 'about' is wrong here. Replace with 'has a well-developed bike-sharing system' to show possession and proper structure. Also 'something else to transport' is unclear; use 'other transport options'. Finally, 'from one to another' should be 'from one place to another'. Suggestions: 1) Use correct prepositions and noun phrases (has a system, for traveling). 2) Use hyphenation for compound adjectives ('well-developed'). 3) Add commas for apposition around 'South Korea'.