Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify meaning, use correct verbs and tense, avoid grammar errors and be concise. Give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then briefly explain with a reason and a linking word. Use simple vocabulary accurately.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, after I had a serious accident I became afraid to ride it, so I stopped using it for several years. Since then I have only ridden a bicycle occasionally and very carefully.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer then support with specific reasons or examples. Use correct collocations (e.g., "bike clubs" not "making club"). Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Keep it within a few coherent sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people join cycling clubs because they enjoy riding together and it’s a good way to stay fit. For example, weekend group rides and charity cycling events attract large numbers of cyclists.

× I used to enjoy writing bike, but since I got smart accident it was afraid to ride bike.

✓ I used to enjoy riding my bike, but after I had a serious accident I became afraid to ride it.

Errors: 'writing bike' is incorrect verb choice; the correct verb for using a bicycle is 'ride' (Grammar problem type IDs 8 and 26). 'since I got smart accident' is ungrammatical and unclear; use 'after I had a serious accident' to express a past event that caused a change (IDs 5 and 6). 'it was afraid to ride bike' incorrectly assigns fear to 'it' (the bike) and omits possessive; the person is afraid, so use 'I became afraid to ride it' and include the pronoun for the bike (IDs 12 and 26). Suggestions: use the verb 'ride' with 'bike', use 'after I had' or 'since' with appropriate tense ('since' + present perfect for ongoing effects), and ensure subject and pronouns refer to the person who is afraid.

× Yes, absolutely. In my country many people enjoy making club because they can enjoy together their hobby.

✓ Yes, absolutely. In my country many people enjoy forming clubs because they can enjoy their hobbies together.

Errors: 'making club' is incorrect collocation; use 'forming clubs' or 'joining clubs' (ID 26). Missing plural/possessive agreement 'their hobby' should be 'their hobbies' when referring to many people (ID 1). Word order 'enjoy together their hobby' is awkward; adverb 'together' should follow the object: 'enjoy their hobbies together' (ID 20). Also 'club' should be plural when referring generally to multiple groups (ID 1). Suggestions: use correct collocations like 'form clubs' or 'join clubs', make nouns plural to match plural subjects, and place adverbs after the object for natural word order.

× The most popular club is bike people make.

✓ The most popular clubs are the ones made by cyclists.

Errors: 'bike people make' is ungrammatical word order; use a relative clause 'the ones made by cyclists' or 'clubs for cyclists' (IDs 26 and 16). Number agreement: 'club' should be plural if referring to the general most popular type among many (ID 1). Also 'bike people' is an awkward noun phrase; 'cyclists' or 'bike riders' is natural (ID 13). Alternative correction: 'The most popular clubs are cycling clubs.' Suggestions: use natural noun phrases like 'cycling clubs' or a relative clause, ensure plural agreement, and prefer 'cyclists' for people who ride bikes.