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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. Every people, every everyone.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题,没有直接回答问题。要在开头直接给出肯定或否定的答案(主题句),然后用一到两句具体细节支持。避免重复考官的话,控制在最多五句内,并使用连词使表达连贯。举例:说明有无自行车、何时得到、用途或与朋友/家人的关系。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got a small red bike when I was seven and used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood. It helped me make friends because we often raced and explored nearby parks together.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答给出了肯定,但重复且含糊(“Every people, every everyone” 不自然且不具体)。应在主题句后提供具体理由或例子,使用连词如 because, for example, and, so 来增强逻辑性。可以说明在哪些场合流行(通勤、运动、休闲)、哪些人群常用以及原因(方便、便宜、环保)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting to work and school. For example, in big cities you can see cyclists on dedicated bike lanes during rush hour, and in rural areas families often use bicycles for short trips to the market.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

该学生把考官的问题重复作为回答,未形成完整的陈述句作为回答。属于句子结构错误(没有动词或完整回应)。建议直接回答是或否并用过去时补充细节,例如 “Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.” 这样既肯定回答又提供了与问题时态一致的补充信息。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. Every people, every everyone.

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. Almost everyone uses them.

原句“Every people, every everyone”不是正确的表达,属于句子结构和用词错误。英文中不能说 “every people”;要表达“每个人”或“几乎每个人”,应使用 “everyone” 或 “almost everyone”,并在第二句中使用完整句子结构(主语 + 动词 + 宾语)。建议改为 “Almost everyone uses them.” 或 “They are used by almost everyone.”

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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